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Ini artikel belum siap, ditambah lagi masak dua kali berturut-turut artikelnya perang dan konflik? Mana topik yang lain? Desember 1 itu hari AIDS sedunia, banyak yang bisa diajukan seperti artikel mengenai kesehatan, relawan, pekerja kesehatan, penyakit menular dsb-dsb. [[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 01:19, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
::waktu itu emang masih sementara, tapi ini udah terlanjur kepasang di halaman utama, mestinya komplain sebelumnya @_@ <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span> 07:32, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
:: Loh, yang ngajuin juga mustinya ''time-sensitive'' dong. Gue sih rata aja ngomelinnya, waktu itu juga si Blacknight kena karena dua kali berturut-turut artikel pilihan manga terus, sewikipedia isinya manga kali. Hari Pahlawan 10 November lewat, Hari AIDS sedunia lewat, hari ibu artikel perang nuklir aja sekalian. [[User:Serenity|Serenity]] 07:57, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
tenang dunk, abis ini masih ada beberapa artikel yang masih bisa '''ditolak''', kalo udah ditampilin udah ga bisa diturunin, kecuali di EN ada halaman buat menjatuhkan status AP, namun, disini blm ada, perlu proposal lagi *males buat* <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span> 08:02, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
::oh iya, saya kan ga time sensitif :p mestinya dulu mbak menolak dunk :p <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span>
+ makin ruwet lagi, [[Wikipedia:Pemilihan artikel pilihan]] ditolak gara2 pada apatis, jadinya ya, susah kalo mau naro jadwal, kalo pake proposal baru, naro jadwal gampang, kalo mbak rasa ga pas sama waktu tinggal tolak <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span> 08:04, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
==Intro==
:''Karena banyak negara adidaya ikut dalam konflik ini, Perang Soviet-Afganistan sama besarnya dengan Perang Vietnam.'' Maksudnya sama besar dari segi apa? Referensi? [[Pengguna:Hayabusa future|Hayabusa future]] ([[Bicara Pengguna:Hayabusa future|\0-0/]]) 09:24, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
lihat http://www.philsheppard.com.au/userimages/THECOLDWARPARTTWOhtml.htm ada rujukan:
{{cquote2|The occupation of Afghanistan was a disaster. By the time the last troops left in February 1989, Soviet casualties numbered fifteen thousand. But the real damage was to the superpower image of the USSR. Mikhael Gorbachev, however, was able to save face for the Soviets, agreeing to troop withdrawal in 1988. This fall from invincibility and the crippling expense of financing a lost cause would, in part, contribute to the disintegration of the Soviet Union in the early 1990s. The Afghan campaign has often been referred to as the equivalent of the United States' Vietnam War.}}
<span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span> 09:27, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
::oh iya, maksud besarnya itu dari segi militer lah, korbannya banyak, negara2 byk ikut <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span>
== Artikel ini belum siap ==
Artikel ini belum siap untuk menjadi artikel pilihan. Banyak terjemahan yang agak kacau.
Contoh: ''Najibullah kehilangan kontrol internal dengan segera dia mengumumkan kemauannya, pada tanggal 18 Maret, untuk berhenti agar membuat jalan untuk pemerintahan yang netral untuk sementara. Ironisnya, sampai mengacaukan oleh peninggalan pemimpin seniornya, pasukan Afganistan telah mencapai level tertinggi prestasinya yang tidak pernah dicapai saat diarahkan oleh pengawasan Soviet.''
Ini tidak jelas maksudnya apa... [[Pengguna:Hayabusa future|Hayabusa future]] ([[Bicara Pengguna:Hayabusa future|\0-0/]])
::yah ini emang terjemahan jadul saya waktu masih pertama kali, jadinya masih kacau.. mas hayabusa bantu proofread saja, saya juga proofread dikid2.. masalahnya udah terlanjur tampil, mestinya ditolak pas dicalonkan <span style="border:1px solid #808;padding:1px;">[[Pembicaraan Pengguna:Mimihitam|<font style="color:#fff;background:#ccc;">''' Mimihitam '''</font><font style="color:#ff0000;background:#000000;">''' Bicara '''</font>]] </span> 12:00, 26 November 2007 (UTC)
== External links found that need fixing (Oktober 2023) ==
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*https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/opinions/1990/10/14/east-germanys-dirty-secret/09375b6f-2ae1-4173-a0dc-77a9c276aa4b/ is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20190105094332/https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/opinions/1990/10/14/east-germanys-dirty-secret/09375b6f-2ae1-4173-a0dc-77a9c276aa4b/ to the original URL.
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== External links found that need fixing (November 2023) ==
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I have found one or more external links on [[Perang Soviet–Afganistan]] that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:
*http://www.afghan-web.com/history/articles/hypocrisies.html is considered to be dead, however has been found to be alive. Recommend removing the dead flag from the URL.
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