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== External links found that need fixing (Oktober 2023) ==
Hello fellow editors,
I have found one or more external links on [[Klitih]] that are in need of attention. Please take a moment to review the links I found and correct them on the article if necessary. I found the following problems:
*https://jogja.tribunnews.com/2019/06/28/2-pelaku-klitih-di-magelang-berhasil-ditangkap-korban-dibacok-dan-dirampas-hp-nya is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230406062140/https://jogja.tribunnews.com/2019/06/28/2-pelaku-klitih-di-magelang-berhasil-ditangkap-korban-dibacok-dan-dirampas-hp-nya to the original URL.
*https://borobudurnews.com/modus-klitih-mertoyudan-tanya-alamat-kemudian-tebaskan-golok/ is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230405232022/https://borobudurnews.com/modus-klitih-mertoyudan-tanya-alamat-kemudian-tebaskan-golok/ to the original URL.
*https://www.liputan6.com/citizen6/read/4930153/mengenal-apa-itu-klitih-fenomena-kekerasan-jalanan-yang-marak-terjadi-di-yogyakarta is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230406062138/https://www.liputan6.com/citizen6/read/4930153/mengenal-apa-itu-klitih-fenomena-kekerasan-jalanan-yang-marak-terjadi-di-yogyakarta to the original URL.
*https://tirto.id/klitih-kenakalan-remaja-yang-terkadang-berujung-maut-dbsk is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230406043152/https://tirto.id/klitih-kenakalan-remaja-yang-terkadang-berujung-maut-dbsk to the original URL.
*https://travel.kompas.com/read/2022/04/06/051627827/apa-itu-klitih-di-yogyakarta-berikut-asal-usulnya is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230327121202/https://travel.kompas.com/read/2022/04/06/051627827/apa-itu-klitih-di-yogyakarta-berikut-asal-usulnya to the original URL.
*https://kumparan.com/@kumparannews/sejarah-klitih-di-yogyakarta is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20190630172919/https://kumparan.com/@kumparannews/sejarah-klitih-di-yogyakarta to the original URL.
*https://kumparan.com/@kumparannews/klitih-dan-status-jagoan-remaja-di-yogyakarta is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20190630184450/https://kumparan.com/@kumparannews/klitih-dan-status-jagoan-remaja-di-yogyakarta to the original URL.
When you have finished making the appropriate changes, please visit [[:m:InternetArchiveBot/FAQ|this simple FaQ]] for additional information to fix any issues with the URLs mentioned above.
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Cheers.—[[User:InternetArchiveBot|'''<span style="color:darkgrey;font-family:Courier New">InternetArchiveBot</span>''']] <span style="color:green;font-family:Rockwell">([[:en:User talk:InternetArchiveBot|Melaporkan kesalahan]])</span> 4 Oktober 2023 08.26 (UTC)
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